As you are all coming in and out of my office this week picking up unessay feedback and journals, I want to remind you that you have an opportunity to rewrite one unessay for a new grade. Let me tell you a couple things about the opportunity:
- You need to submit a one page, double spaced paper that describes the changes you made to your piece and answers this questions: "Why will those changes result in a more effective piece of composition?'
- You need to email it to me by midnight on Monday, December 21
- I recommend you stop in some time this week to chat about it
- I expect the changes to be significant, especially if you did not do well on the first draft; an added comma and couple additional sentences is rarely going to change your work much.